You've got in a load of great details and nice colours. Her face isnt half bad either But it does have a problem in the fact that she doesnt really rest on the divan/sofa. It's a bit too flat and lack dimension. I'm not too sure myself how to get things like that to look right. Furniture in use is a nightmare to draw The only concrete suggestions I have would be to fold her skirt so that it looks like it's draping over the edge of the sofa, likewise with her tail. Itll help with the impression of setting her further back from the edge. Her foot closest to us is also "hovering" without really looking supported. The divan is also too undefined in the seat. It took me actually quite a while to realise the shape of it. (It was the pillows that clued me in...eventually ) I hope Im not being too harsh here by the way. Well, regardless, I hope you do well in the contest, and that you keep trying new things
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But it does have a problem in the fact that she doesnt really rest on the divan/sofa. It's a bit too flat and lack dimension. I'm not too sure myself how to get things like that to look right. Furniture in use is a nightmare to draw
The only concrete suggestions I have would be to fold her skirt so that it looks like it's draping over the edge of the sofa, likewise with her tail. Itll help with the impression of setting her further back from the edge. Her foot closest to us is also "hovering" without really looking supported.
The divan is also too undefined in the seat. It took me actually quite a while to realise the shape of it. (It was the pillows that clued me in...eventually
Well, regardless, I hope you do well in the contest, and that you keep trying new things
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